3 day writing

-CHAPTER 1-

It was one dark night when  a mystery man entered the building. While the mysteries man was trying to fix the inc machine, The power suddenly turned off. So he had to turn it back on. When he can back the inc machine was up and going… But he didn't fix it so he got scared and exited the building. He came back the next day. Wabam he he fell through the floor. As I got up and grabbed an red axe.

-CHAPTER 2-

As I walk through the hallway, kaea jumped out and said boo! I screamed and bolted away. But there was no escape so I came back with a red axe and tried to attack, but kaea was nowhere to be seen it was like he disappeared through thin air. So i keep moving. As I smashed the door down I saw Kaea in the room I charged at him then he disappeared I kept moving on and found a lever so I pulled the lever. A secret door open. So I went in the dark small corridor.

-CHAPTER 3 COMING VERY SOON-

sick sentenced

As i approached the bloody room I saw my child hood nightmares coming to life as my heart exploded i died. The END.

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Refugee letter

Welcome to New Zealand

I am writing to you so that when you get to New Zealand, you feel welcome. We have been learning about refugees and your country. The reason we are writing to you is for you to come to New Zealand, it is a wonderful place to stay at.

Before I do tell you all of New Zealand I have to introduce myself. My name is Howard Yang, my parents came from China, but me and my older brother Jackson was born in Auckland. Then about 4 or 5 years later, my little brother William was born. I stayed in Auckland for 1 month then left to live in Hastings.

New Zealand is a wonderful place and it is know for making The Lord of the Rings movie and for being clean. Here are some things kiwi children like to do. Some kids like to go to the beach and eat fish n chips, but most kids these days they just stay home and play video games and eat food. But in the summer, they go to water parks, playing at the beach and eating ice cream.  I’m sure you will like that to right?

Things you would enjoy in New Zealand are going to water parks, eating food, going to beaches and

Playing video games. If you get really bored, rugby in New Zealand is a very famous sport so is cricket too. There has not been much violence going on in New Zealand so don't be afraid to come out in the dark.

Our NZ language we speak here is Māori but most of our people in New Zealand speak english.

Finally, I hope you have a nice time in New Zealand.

You will have a great time here in New Zealand and I know it.

Yours sincerely,

Howard Age:11

My refugee writhing thing.

As the refugee ran for there  lives against the raging solders, as the sun shrivelled thier skin like a burning wood on a fire place.

Sick sentences.

Original:I looked through the wired Fence. The people looked sad like they running somewhere. I felt bad for them.

Fixed one:As I peered through the reinforced metal gate,I saw a soldier shooting at point blank at an escaping refugee it made me felt sad. For that refugee who lost his life while trying to make an escape.

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Suddenly, A mysterious mega fish big extra large fish, appeared out of nowhere. Then… WABAM! An island jumped, out of the big blue sea. 10 Hours later, The big fat fish began bigger and bigger.Until 1 day… It took up the whole river. Something has to be done, Then a boat appeared out of the thin air. The fisherman in the boat wanted some fish so, he threw his bait down and waited for a fish 5 second later, his bait got bitten the fisherman pulled and pulled with all his might. But then the gigantic fish jumped out of the water Then… gulp the boat and the fisherman disappeared 12 weeks later the pond was blocked off, and the fish died of starvation. THE END