Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Monday, June 27, 2016

   
Use sentences with different beginnings, and different lengths.
Use simple, compound and complex sentences.

Use DESCRIPTIVE WOW words

Use paragraphs when changing your ideas

Use some “Speech” in your writing

SEEK FEEDBACK FROM AT LEAST 3 PEOPLE!











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The scary story  [Brought by the House next door!]
BOOM one night there was 3 kids and 1 old lady and house. hey stop the story for a bit what are we talking about WHY DO I ALWAYS TELL YOU WHAT WE ARE TALKING ABOUT! Never mind. Okay. they were Named. Howard,Tane,Kaea and the old Man was called Big toe . Hey stop the story we need snacks fine what one ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! FRIES since it's friday fine we will have 200 Scoops of chips please. That will be $200
Dollers! ARE YOU KIDDING ME HERE YOU GO SIR! Thanks have a good day. Okay back to the story! There were walking around THEN the kids said look there is a fire barrel BOOM ow. Im cold im gonna go in that house there


Wait a minute Don't go in there Tane it's a haunted house you're just bluffing it's looking at you AHHHHHHHHHHH! Watch out BOOM
I just survived! Stop the story What you have to pay the bill how much $1,000,000,000.
Done back to the story so the old man said GET OUT OF THE HOUSE! And we say:ok and why do you keep stealing our stuff! Ummmmmmmm never mind. Time for dinner boys. COMING Well let’s     go! Hey kids want some lollie’s.
Sorry but we have to go now. Hey stop grabbing us MUM HELP! Whaaa!?
Oh no! Where trapped wwe gotta find a way outta here. HAHAHAHAHAHA! Now i'm gonna cook you for dinner. Guy’s  There’s Two option outta here1 Escaping 2 Calling for help Me and Tane vote for option 1 so what do you think kaea? Fine option 1. We need to make a squad Im Delta team 1 Tane your Delta team2 And kaea your Delta team 3 Okay take these what are these!? This is a radio we can talk to each other far away. Ok let’s roll out. Delta 2 do you copy loud and and clear where’s the exit far to my right. Okay delta 2 out Delta 3 you there delta 3 do you copy  Delta 2 delta 3 is executed. AHHHHHHHHHHHH!? Guy’s im been captured is that you Delta 3!?
Yes He blocked the exit We are doomed


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How long has it been! BOOM hey the wall just blow up know we can go in the woods and camp there and eat some Bacon and waffles!



THE END!


PART 2 COMING SOON!

Wednesday, June 22, 2016

Manu aute day

Manu aute day
[By Howard yang]

Hey this kite is easy to make all I have to do is tieing it up and that’s this is perfect White dorito has risen
it. 1 Hour later This is the boring old path to walk on. The walk was boring but it’s worth walking all the way to the park. Meanwhile at the park. Finally I can now eat Sitting down eating 1 large pie mmmmm delicious ! 1 minute later that day there were kid’s screaming! My ear feels like death. Finally  me and ben were using the kite “Fly white dorito” yelled ben. Guy’s look it’s flying say’s little kid’s yelling to them self’s.

Tuesday, June 21, 2016

Bike safety poster

 This is the bike safety poster. Please leave a comment. This poster is about keeping you safe when your bike on the road or at night time.

Wednesday, June 8, 2016

Matairki myth

     This post is about matariki the reason we are studying matariki is because this week is matariki and the maori new year.